The Brand + Copy Optimiser

A personalised brand, business, and copy optimiser (Yes, optimiser is a bit of a corporate word. But ya gal isn't putting lipstick on this pig either — because what this actually is, is the most useful thing you'll ever spend $995 on.)

Most people spend 6-12 months and thousands of dollars in courses, coaches, and content trying to crack their next income level. Tweaking. Guessing. Pivoting.

This does it in 5 days.

A precise, expert review of your entire brand ecosystem — your website, socials, email sequence, and sales page — delivered by someone who has spent years studying the exact science of why people buy, why they bounce, and what the gap is between the two.

Me on Loom, imaginary black Amex card on hand, telling you exactly what's working, what's quietly costing you, and what to fix first to unlock higher conversions and break through to your next income level. Fast.

What you can expect after this is:

  • The exact messaging shifts that make soul-aligned clients say "shut up and take my left kidney"

  • Fewer steps, higher conversions, more dream clients without adding complexity or another damn funnel

  • The "holy shit, THAT'S what makes me different" clarity so you can own your edge and be hellavalot more confident in your prices and selling the sh*t out of yourself.

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You're a legend...

Who is magical, full of inspiration and ideas, (let's be real, probably toooooo much inspo leaving you with 33 different offers on your website and a folder full of 91 potential new offer ideas).

You know your sh*t, and know that when you finally do call in your soul aligned clients absolute FIRE happens with crazy good transformations.

Yet... why does it feel so damn hard to find those clients? Why does it feel so impossible to crack the next revenue level, stuck trying to justify your prices - to yourself mostly.

And you're ready to just know. The gaps. The gold. Exactly what's holding your conversions back and what to fix.

You're ready for someone who genuinely knows what they're looking at—telling you the truth about your brand + business.

Correct me if I am wrong... but

You didn't start your business to become a marketer

When I started my first business making candles, I did it for the love of candles — and wanting to get them into the hands of people who'd love them too.

What I didn't expect was the rabbit hole. SEO. UX. Conversion rate optimisation. Email marketing. Brand positioning. Pricing psychology. All the things you suddenly have to know just to get your actual work in front of actual people.

Turns out those things were fun for me. Genuinely. I'm a nerd about this stuff.

But I am guessing they aren't super fun for you.

Most people started their business to share their gift — and found themselves spending more time trying to attract clients than actually serving them. More time tweaking their website than doing the work they love. More time wondering what's wrong with their copy than getting on with building something great.

The Brand + Copy Optimiser gives you the shortcut. Years of expertise, hundreds of hours of study, and thousands of dollars in education — distilled into a precise, personalised roadmap for YOUR brand. Delivered in 5 business days.

For the solo-ish service goddesses

This is for the goddesses in service to others - you are a coach, consultant, content creator, photographer, physio, web designer, yoga teacher, breathwork practitioner, bookkeeper, and probably all of the above for your own business.

This is for the superstars who are ready to say goodbye to:

  • Spending months and thousands of dollars taking courses and trying to DIY your way to a brand that actually feels cohesive and calls in the clients you actually want to work with.

  • Guessing whether your pricing is too high, too low, or just confusing — and leaving thousands on the table because pricing psychology isn't exactly taught in school.

  • Copying what you see other successful brands doing without understanding the strategy behind it — so your brand feels like a Frankenstein of tactics that don't quite fit together.

  • Tweaking things constantly because some Instagram reel told you the orange CTA button converts better — and now you have a to-do list the size of your unread emails and zero clarity on what actually moves the needle.

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Here's what's inside the Brand + Copy Optimiser

The only brand, business, copy, funnel audit you need to attract and convert soul aligned clients ethically and with ease.

Your roadmap to an extra $100K includes:

  • 15-20 min "Stranger View" Loom

    Experience your brand the way a first-time visitor does—see exactly where you're losing people before they even consider buying

  • Personalised written report

    No more guessing what to fix first—you get a clear, prioritised roadmap you can hand to your VA or implement yourself

  • 30-60 min Strategy Deep-Dive Loom

    Get expert eyes on your positioning, pricing, and copy—spot the blind spots you literally cannot see yourself

  • 2 weeks WhatsApp support

    Get real-time feedback as you make changes—no waiting days for email responses or wondering if you're doing it right.

Price $1,995

OG pricing for just $995

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WHAT YOU CAN EXPECT FEEDBACK ON

DISCOVERY — How people are finding you

☐ Whether your content volume and variety is actually enough to build discoverability — or whether you're posting 3 times a week and wondering why traffic isn't compounding

☐ Whether you have any content with shelf life — blogs, podcasts, guest appearances, SEO-optimised pages — that works for you when you're not actively creating

☐ Whether your social media profiles pass the 3-second test — do they communicate who you are, who you help, and why you're different before someone decides to scroll away

☐ Whether you're leveraging other people's audiences through collaborations, referral systems, and partnerships — or trying to build discoverability entirely alone

☐ Whether your SEO is working for you or whether you're invisible to people actively searching for what you do right now

NURTURE — How you're building trust before the sale

☐ Whether you have enough depth content — podcasts, long-form emails, video, blogs — for people to spend real time with you. Research shows people need approximately 7 hours of content consumption before they trust someone enough to buy. I look at whether your ecosystem supports that

☐ Whether your email sequence is genuinely warming people up — or delivering a freebie and then going quiet

☐ Whether you're using reciprocity effectively — giving value so freely and consistently that people feel a natural pull to invest when the time comes. The quality of your free content is the loudest signal you send about the quality of your paid offers

☐ Whether your content is building a coherent picture of your Edge and expertise across platforms — or whether it's scattered and disconnected

☐ Whether your nurture content is hitting different buyer types — the ones who need logic, the ones who need to feel understood, the ones who need social proof, and the ones who just need to feel safe before they'll move

PRICING AND OFFER PACKAGING — Is what you're selling positioned to actually sell

☐ Whether your pricing is sending the right signal — because price communicates value before anyone reads a word of your copy. Are you accidentally selling a $2K offer for $200 and wondering why people aren't treating it seriously

☐ Whether you're using price anchoring effectively — the principle that the first price someone sees dramatically shapes how they perceive every price after it

☐ Whether the paradox of choice is working against you — too many offers, too many options, too many decisions creating paralysis instead of purchases

☐ Whether your offer has one clear hero transformation — or whether it's so loaded with inclusions that the core thing gets buried underneath everything you've generously thrown in

☐ Whether your bonuses are genuinely tipping fence-sitters toward yes or just adding noise and confusion

☐ Whether you're using a decoy offer effectively to make the right option feel like the obvious choice

☐ Whether your risk reversal is strong enough — because every purchase involves risk and the best sales pages address that fear directly instead of hoping people don't notice it

CONVERSION — Your sales page, copy, and the psychology of yes

☐ Your headline — whether it's creating desire or just describing the offer. Your headline is doing more work than any other sentence on your page

☐ Your opening paragraph — where most people lose readers they'll never get back

☐ Your CTA buttons — placement, colour contrast, copy, and frequency. Whether they're appearing at the right moment in the page flow or asking for a decision before it's been earned

☐ Your page flow and UX — friction points, cognitive load, and whether your customer journey from landing to purchasing is smooth or full of reasons to hesitate

☐ Whether you're using loss aversion strategically — because losses feel twice as powerful as equivalent gains and the cost of inaction is one of the most underused tools in sales copy

☐ Whether the Zeigarnik Effect is working in your favour — open loops and curiosity gaps that pull people forward through the page instead of giving everything away too early

☐ Whether you're using the Pratfall Effect — strategic honesty and acknowledged limitations that make everything else you say feel more credible and trustworthy

☐ Whether your social proof is positioned where it matters most — at the exact moment a potential client needs reassurance before they'll keep reading. And whether it's specific enough to land or so vague it slides right off

☐ Whether your page is scannable — because most people don't read sales pages, they scan them. If your most important information is buried in dense paragraphs it isn't being read

☐ The overall arc — whether your page takes someone on a deliberate emotional journey from curious to convinced or just presents information in a logical order that makes sense to you but doesn't build momentum

MESSAGING — Are you saying what your ideal client actually needs to hear

☐ Whether you're leading with what you DO or what they GET — the vehicle or the destination

☐ Whether your copy is written for you — the person who already understands the value — or for the stranger encountering it for the first time with no context and a short attention span

☐ Whether your specificity is strong enough — vague claims don't build trust, they slide off. Specific tangible outcomes land

☐ Whether you're hitting all 4 buyer types — logical, emotional, social proof driven, and safety seeking

☐ Whether the Peak-End Rule is working for you — people remember how an experience felt at its most intense point and how it ended. Whether your page has a clear emotional peak and a strong close or just trails off

☐ Whether your brand voice is consistent across your Instagram, emails, and sales page — or whether it sounds like a different person on every platform. Inconsistency is a trust signal even when people can't name it

THE STRANGER VIEW — What only an outsider can catch

☐ The assumption you've made that your ideal client doesn't share

☐ The industry term that feels normal to you and means nothing to them

☐ The offer detail so obvious to you that you forgot to say it — but without which your ideal client doesn't fully understand what they're buying

☐ The unanswered objection sitting in your ideal client's head that your copy never addresses

☐ The missing sentence that would take someone from "this sounds interesting" to "where do I sign"

☐ Whether your brand passes the 3-second test — can a complete stranger land on your page and immediately understand what you do, who it's for, and why they should care. Not eventually. In 3 seconds.

☐ Whether the Mere Exposure Effect is working for you — whether consistent repeated exposure to your brand across multiple touchpoints is building the familiarity that quietly becomes preference and then trust

How it works

STEP ONE: THE PRE-AUDIT QUESTIONNAIRE

You'll share your goals, bottlenecks, current numbers (website views, leads, monthly revenue), and send me your website, sales page, email nurture sequence, and socials.

This is crucial so I get the full picture of your business so the audit is tailored to YOU, not generic advice.

STEP TWO: THE STRANGER VIEW LOOM (15-20 MIN)

I'll experience your brand like a first-time visitor and record exactly what I'm thinking, feeling, and noticing. Where I get confused. Where I get excited. Where I want to pull out my credit card. Where I bounce.

Psssst... this one always seems to surprise my clients with how beneficial the inside their head perspective is.

STEP THREE: THE STRATEGY DEEP-DIVE LOOM (30-60 MIN)

This is where you get the potent, expert strategy I've spent 5+ years and thousands of dollars learning.

I'll work on three levels:

1. DISCOVERABILITY (The KNOW)

- How people find you in the first place

- Your brand positioning and messaging

- Your content strategy and visibility

- Your "scroll-stopper" factor

2. NURTURE (The LIKE)

- How you build connection and trust

- Your lead magnets and email sequences

- Your storytelling and relatability

- Your brand personality and voice

3. CONVERSION (The TRUST)

- How you turn interest into investment

- Your sales page copy and offer positioning

- Your pricing psychology and payment structure

- Your conversion triggers and trust-builders

STEP FOUR: 2 WEEKS OF WHATSAPP SUPPORT

Send me links with updated copy. Ask questions about pricing. Get real-time feedback via voice notes and text as you implement. No waiting days for email responses. No wondering if you're doing it right.

Investment Options

$995 AUD

OG Price

Goes up to $1995 after the first 10 clients

Payment Plan:

3 monthly payments of $375 AUD

What you are really getting

This isn't just "someone looking at your website."

You're getting access to someone who has spent years studying exactly what makes people buy — and what makes them bounce — across dozens of industries, niches, and price points.

Copy expertise that goes beyond "make it sound better" — I understand the psychology of why words work, why they don't, and exactly what your specific audience needs to hear before they'll say yes.

Conversion rate optimisation knowledge that most people spend years and thousands of dollars acquiring — applied to YOUR pages, YOUR copy, YOUR specific situation.

Pricing psychology that goes way beyond "charge your worth" — actual strategy around how to position, package, and present your prices so they communicate value instead of creating hesitation.

Pattern recognition that only comes from reps — I've seen what converts and what flatlines across hundreds of brands. I know the patterns. And I can see yours immediately.

You're not paying for my time. You're paying for my expertise. And that expertise could save you 6-12 months of trial and error and give you back revenue you didn't know you were leaving on the table.

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☻✌︎︎ MEET THE FOUNDER & CEO

Hey, I'm Bonnie!

I have written copy and brand strategies for 0-7 figure businesses and everything in between. I stopped doing DFY because I birthed an AuDHD hell child who loves to punch and bite teachers…. So yeah, freedom, power, money—it's important to me too.

And having a business that gives me that isn't just a nice to have, it was a MUST. And I know sooo many others that feel the same way too but are soo overwhelmed by bro-marketers' content that they don't know how to simplify and ground down.

That's why I came back to business - to use my knowledge of brand, business, copy, pricing to good use. To raise the wealth of women around the world without the hustle and grind and extraction.

I could list all my creds (Copy, SEO, Marketing etc) but honestly if you have read this far you should already know that I truly am a kick-arse legend for conversion rate optimisation and copy. So instead, here is a list of my red flags.

My red flags:

I will say "love you" on the first date and will end every message with an x.

I am NOT a type A work-till-3am person. I would rather spend lazy afternoons reading ACOTAR.

I am an INFP—and I tend to feel too much and have a very strong sense of justice, fairness, and balance.

I like to think I sit in between strategy and soul. Yes, consult the tarot but ALWAYS trust yourself first. Yes, we need roadmaps and structure but they must allow for flow.

I would rather drive a mower than a Lamborghini.

Frequently Asked Questions

How long does the whole process take?

From the moment you submit your questionnaire, you'll have your full audit (both Looms + written report) within 5 business days. Then you get 2 weeks of WhatsApp support for implementation.

Is this a live call or recorded videos?

It's recorded Loom videos + a written report. This way you can watch/rewatch on your own time and reference the materials whenever you need them.


Then we have two weeks of live, personal support, with me in your back pocket (aka WhatsApp).

I found this is way more effective, informative, and transformational than a live call. We get to spend time to really get to know each other.

What if I need more support after the 2 weeks?

There is an option to extend your WhatsApp support for an extra two weeks or to add on a live call if desired.

That way we can ensure that you get super dooper clear on your next steps, what tweaks to make, and priority feedback on the tweaks you make.

I have quite a few clients that keep me longer than the 2 weeks to keep me as a brand + business coach on demand.

What's your refund policy?

Because this is a custom, done-for-you service, all sales are final. But I promise to deliver massive value—this is my reputation on the line.

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Love Notes from Lovely Clients

Here's the thing

You could spend the next 6 months watching YouTube tutorials and trying to figure this out yourself. You're smart enough. You absolutely could.

Or you could have someone who has spent years obsessing over exactly this — copy, conversion, brand positioning, pricing psychology, the science of why people buy — look at YOUR specific brand and tell you exactly what to do first.

This pays for itself in one properly-priced client.

One.

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